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2019江苏卷英语作文范文:中国传统服装

2020-02-27 14:14

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作者:南昌新东方

2019江苏卷英语作文范文:中国传统服装

题目要求

请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

Li Jiang: Have you heard this? A group of exchange students from the UK are visiting our school next month.
Su Hua: Yes, I have. Some are already recommending the traditional Chinese dress for the welcome ceremony.
Li Jiang: But it seems people have different opinions.
Su Hua: What do you think?
Li Jiang: I think it’s a good idea. It’s an opportunity to make the Chinese culture better known to international students.
Su Hua: I agree. But we don’t have to dress that way. That’s not our daily style. Besides, it’s not very convenient.
Li Jiang: You see, it’s the Chinese culture that the British friends are coming for. Just the right occasion.
Su Hua: I prefer the school uniform. It’s nice. It’s also a better display of our school culture.
写作内容
1.用约30个词概括上述信息的主要内容;
2.在上述场合,你是否倾向于穿中国传统服装?请说明理由(不少于两点)。
写作要求
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不必写标题。
评分标准
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。


优秀满分范文

范文1
Li Jiang and Su Hua are discussing what to wear when receiving the British students next month. Li recommends the traditional Chinese dress while Su prefers the school uniform.
I would be happy to wear traditional Chinese clothes at the welcome ceremony. Firstly, this is precisely what the British visitors are expecting. They come to learn about Chinese culture with their own eyes. Their Chinese peers in the typical Chinese dress would be highly impressive. The school uniforms are fine, but not special enough to give a unique Chinese flavour. Secondly, the inconvenience is not a problem if our purpose is to share Chinese culture. It is just the so-called inconvenience that displays the richness, delicacy and great fascination of Chinese culture with a history of thousands of years.
The traditional Chinese clothes, it seems to me, will make the occasion very Chinese and inviting to the British guests.
范文2
Li Jiang and Su Hua don't agree on what to wear when greeting the British students. Li suggests traditional Chinese clothes while Su thinks the school uniforms are more suitable.
I prefer the school uniform to the traditional Chinese dress at the welcome ceremony next month. Although the traditional Chinese dress may look more beautiful and stylish, it is a little bit strange to walk around in it. We feel at ease in our school uniforms every day. What's more, the traditional Chinese dress can't reflect the unique culture of our school. From the design and colour of our uniforms, the British friends will learn more about our school. Besides, the choice of the traditional Chinese dress means extra money, and extra time, for we have to change it back after the event.
So the school uniforms are a better choice than the traditional Chinese dress for such an occasion.


写作解析

1、本文是读写任务,今年的话题是关于中国传统服装的。读写任务首先要写好概括。概括短文的内容要点实为客观简要地转述作者的观点、论据和结论,概括包括两个部分:主题句和支撑句。概括注意要抓住要点,语言精练,不能添加自己的见解,但是要用自己的语言概括。
2、第二段用恰当的过渡语引出自己的观点(反对或赞成)。过渡语起承上启下的作用,要显自然、连贯。提出自己的观点后要具体论证自己的观点。
3、最后一段要总结观点,提出具体做法或号召,升华文章的主题。


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