二、负向文章行文思路：

1、社会层面

(1)中央地方共同努力

The local officials should resort to the law to regulate ( environmental conservation ) . Besides, the central government is not supposed to hand a blank check to the local and should be partially involved in (curbing the local tainted environment).

(2)政府立法听民意

Our government should resort to the law to regulate ( the standard of product quality ) and shall listen to public opinions and demands when formulating laws, regulations and policies relating to (quality of product)

(3)政府直面问题，听民意，平衡两者关系

Our government should not sugarcoat(cover) the problem but listen to public opinions and demands when formulating laws, regulations and policies relating to (09-网络远近the Internet) and

try to juggle ( the use of network and the supervision on it/ control over it )

try to balance between (the use of network and the control over it)

juggle A and B

unfavorable information

balance between A and B

(4)学校提供相关教育

Our colleges are supposed to provide training and course for students to learn how to juggle (03溺爱孩子their physical development and psychological maturity/ 13选择 their study at school and internship outside the campus/off campus) on campus

(5)学校组织

Student Union should start/kick off campaign, both inside and outside the campus(both on and off campus), to educate people that ( 06追星--chasing idol during the youth should be properly handled by their parents. )

(6)媒体

Media can broadcast less commercials and more public service advertisements

to call on parents to ( 03溺爱parent their children properly )

to promote the awareness of (03溺爱 right parenting )

2、个人层面

(1)有问题找家长和辅导员

Our young generation should turn to our student supervisors and parents for recommendations about

how to (balance between internship and academy for their future career.)

how to promote their awareness of ( )

how to strengthen their belief that ( )

(2)积极投入活动

We should take part into the campaign to promote the awareness of ( ) and fulfill our accountability as a member of our community.

(3)啥都做

No matter how much fund that our government would put into (the recovery of tainted region), we will never see (a clean sky or breath fresh air) if effort of the young generation were absent. Although not financially independent, our college students must be doing everything we can to fulfill our duty to take part into the improvement of our community.

3、负向文章行文思路结尾：

With efforts from all walks of life, it is certain that the situation would get improved soon.